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Alright- part two...
Attached is a green line crit of how I think the balance should work. The head has been tilted down and towards the veiwer more, and her etended leg has bend straightened. This gives the illusion that she is tring to correct gravity. I made her head large in this, cause it looked very faye that size
That's why I'm picking you liked the head- right? Good choice, just needed to pull the proportions out to suit 
I also suggest a cupping in the hands like she was trying to mould the leaves power.
In the end though- she is a delicate creature, and you captured that beautifully ^^ Yes, I noticed the photoshop leaf tool XD I use that a bit myself! It great, huh? [thumb8733] I used it here cause I was too lazy to to tree trunk and tree
It worked out very well though ^^ (I also used the grass one too cause I was running out of time) I use to rip at the Paint shop proo ones, but the brush ones are real handy. I have a smal libuary of them now
Attached is a green line crit of how I think the balance should work. The head has been tilted down and towards the veiwer more, and her etended leg has bend straightened. This gives the illusion that she is tring to correct gravity. I made her head large in this, cause it looked very faye that size
That's why I'm picking you liked the head- right? Good choice, just needed to pull the proportions out to suit I also suggest a cupping in the hands like she was trying to mould the leaves power. In the end though- she is a delicate creature, and you captured that beautifully ^^ Yes, I noticed the photoshop leaf tool XD I use that a bit myself! It great, huh? [thumb8733] I used it here cause I was too lazy to to tree trunk and tree
It worked out very well though ^^ (I also used the grass one too cause I was running out of time) I use to rip at the Paint shop proo ones, but the brush ones are real handy. I have a smal libuary of them now Comment ID 47584
![[Art] Autumn Faerie](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_img_thumb_9273_52ad9cd6f481bc4f57d5674e48eaeb615ebf2564390e0.jpg)
Oh wow~ Thank you for all the wonderful crit~ I see what you mean with her being a bit off balanced and stiff x3 that's a big problem with some of the work I tend to do. Your visual aids really helped ^_^ Perhaps one of these days when I have more time I will re-do her~ <3
And yes ^__^ I love the slightly unsaturated version~ It adds a very nice feel to it.
I love photoshop brushes x3; I used the grass and leaf ones in my mini comic some time back x3; but it's pretty bad >.> Because I couldn't colour worth anything back then x3; Oh well~
Yours came out very nicely tho <3 And yay for FMA x3;
And yes ^__^ I love the slightly unsaturated version~ It adds a very nice feel to it.
I love photoshop brushes x3; I used the grass and leaf ones in my mini comic some time back x3; but it's pretty bad >.> Because I couldn't colour worth anything back then x3; Oh well~
Yours came out very nicely tho <3 And yay for FMA x3;
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