Comment 75828

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blackwinddragon
Jan 18, 2009, 5:35:21 PM UTC
How is thi sexactly a work in progress? This makes a lovely sketch! The only thing that could be added is 1) colour or 2)a background.

So far though I think you've done a really good job especially with the scales.

But there's always room for improvement -- if I may suggest? Her hair looks a little stiff. it should be moving with her, hair is like fabric, it moves with the body.

Comment ID 75828

[Art] Mermaid
Perplexity
Jan 24, 2009, 7:45:55 PM UTC on [Art] Mermaid
Yeah you are right the hair looks a bit like one big piece, eh?
As for work in progress, I guess I thought she looked a bit lost without a background... but I doubt I'll ever go back and put one in, so I guess we can call this one finished! Wink
Thank you very much for the critiques and suggestions - much appreciated!

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