Comment 85104
Comment ID 85104
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Hello A-n-W. I saw in the chatbox that you wanted critique on your work so I thought I'd make a few comments.
First I think your style is great and your coloring style works fine. The composition here is very nice and her face has a very nice expression.
In terms of anatomy there's one area that could be a bit better. See the attached visual critique where I've placed a wireframe for the bust and hips. Once I placed this in, I saw that the butt of the girl is ending too far down. Which makes the start of her thighs too low. So when sketching out the figure, draw an egg for the upper torso and a box for the hips to get a better sense of proportion and placement.
Her gesture/pose is really nice. So keep it up!
First I think your style is great and your coloring style works fine. The composition here is very nice and her face has a very nice expression.
In terms of anatomy there's one area that could be a bit better. See the attached visual critique where I've placed a wireframe for the bust and hips. Once I placed this in, I saw that the butt of the girl is ending too far down. Which makes the start of her thighs too low. So when sketching out the figure, draw an egg for the upper torso and a box for the hips to get a better sense of proportion and placement.
Her gesture/pose is really nice. So keep it up!
Will do!