Script Frenzy day 9

Thanks to Easter holidays I've managed to get almost 50 pages already. that means I'm almost half way to the goal and 20 days left. 

What I've been doing is fleshing out my scenes trying to think how my characters would react to lead to the direction I want the story go. The scenes purpose is either edvace the plot through some action or reveal omething about the situation or the characters. I'm trying to follow the maxim "show, don't tell" so the characters actions should be what advances the story.

One of my goals is to improve the descriptions in my script. Since I have been writing for myself to draw I don't often actually describe how I visualise the scene, only what action there is. Now I'm using the page count as an incentive to produce longer and more detailed descriptions.

Page count 47.