Love Metal: Chapter 1

Published Jul 29, 2004, 3:14:41 PM UTC | Last updated Jul 29, 2004, 3:14:41 PM | Total Chapters 1

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Well, I work at the Fundia Wire Oy Ab (which happens to produce steel wire to heavy machine industry...), and they have to heat the beams to a 1200 Celcius, so that they could mould them into wire... And i've always wanted to touch the metal, when it comes from the "oven"...

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Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm watching reddish glow going past me,
As i'm reeling on to the safety handrail,
Beam of metal,
Casting unbelieveable heat to this hall,
But i'm less than a meter away from it,
Turning my glance elsewhere,
Heat making me sweat,
Red glow making me to look into it,
Deep,
Deep,
Deep...

Now i'm waiting for another beam to cross my line-of-sight,
Like a drug abuser,
The reddish glow is calling me,
Seducting me to close her into my arms,
And keep her tender.

And suddently,
I'm standing on the overpass,
Looking one beam coming towards me,
The mumbling getting stronger now,
A sweet girl's voice,
Calling for me,
Wanting to keep me satisfied for a eternity,
But is this real,
Or is it just madness?

Now from the edge,
I leap to eternity...

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