A Succubi: Chapter 1

Published Aug 25, 2004, 10:34:15 PM UTC | Last updated Aug 25, 2004, 10:34:15 PM | Total Chapters 1

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This is... This is... Dark... It's a poem, that sprouted out of my mind like a nightmare... I'll regret putting this piece out here as soon as i press the submit button...

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Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A normal walk to the village already under the warm grasp of summer,
Grass waving like a raging sea in the strenght of wind,
A tower too high for him rises in the horizon,
As he walks stony road,
Alone,
In his thoughts,
When suddently...

...A girl,
Smiling nervously,
Stands in middle of two oaks,
And waves him to follow her,
As she wanders into the forest.

He stands before a lake,
So calm lays she on the moss,
Naked like a stillborn child,
He feels a tickling sensation in his pants,
As she spread her legs,
He then undresses and gently comes on top of her...

...Such tightness he had never felt in his life,
As a virgin body starts to move,
With his thrusts of lance too big for her,
As she moans under his weakening body.

(And the carpet of moss,
now turns red with blood...)

A lance deep inside her,
As she spreads her legs,
Her moans,
(Of pain or pleasure,
no one knows),
Comes louder,
As he enjoys her sweetness even more,
She then starts to draw his lifeforce away,
As he is in deepest point inside her,
Near a orgasm as he is.

He feels a odd sensation,
Inside her tight vagina,
As you would expect from a thing,
That posess the body of a 13 summers seen,
But suddently,
This odd sensation fills his whole body,
Starting from his penis,
That is still inside her,
Sprouting out sperm,
And the odd sensation starts to move,
To his guts at first,
Before spreading to his limbs,
A feeling so cold and so dead,
That he understands,
He's dying because of this little sweet girl,
Tight and ready for another round,
Or so it seems,
Now his mind understands,
And changed his expression,
From pleasure to dread too great to be told,
As his body is drained from last drops of lifeforce...

Now near old oak,
She looks back and froans,
A man too horny to fuck too young girl,
But the hornyness backfired with numbers too great to be true,
When he fucked with a succubi,
A death too painful to be told,
And her body now changing,
Making her virgin again,
Tightening her vagina with a force,
Because his penis was,
In the end,
Too big for her,
Her hand takes a grip from her lower stomach,
From the pain unimaginable,
And a single tear flows on her cheek,
She grabs hold from a mighty tree,
To stop her from shaking,
Then she starts to walk,
Blood flowing down on her legs,
To find a new man to fuck,
And to drain their lifeforce away...

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