Chapter 1: Ch.1 - Just the Beginning
TREMORS VS. ALIENS
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I wrote this story two years ago, today I look back on it and think about how bad it was, and how much it sucked. Anyways, it is my most popular story on FF.net so now that BogusRed is allowing pg-13 work on PD, ill repost it in all its glory, minus the Author Notes and spelling errors that riddled a lot of my older work.
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Ch.1 - Just the Beginning
Five kids broke into an underground lab. It has been desolate for many years now, since the government had vacated.
The tallest one had a bat and readied it to swing. He smashed a glass case, spilling the contents. The others pulled out rocks
and started smashing everything. They all laughed when one of them knocked down a rusty old door marked Bio-Containment.
They all walked in and one raised a 2x4 when they saw the eggs. Five of them opened and what flew out latched themselves to their faces.
Later.....
A young boy wearing jeans, a white t-shirt and a rather large jacket walked up to Changs Market in Perfection, Nevada.
He walks in and sits at the counter. Can I get a pop over here? he says with a Scottish accent. Jodi Chang, and attractive
young businesswoman, fills a fountain drink for the young man. Tourist? she asks. The boy pulls out papers. Oh so your
moving here? He took a long drink. Yea. She went about her business. So, how old are you? she asked. 19, he replied.
They chatted for a few minutes when scientist Cletus Poffenbergerran into the store. Where is Burt? he asked, out of breath. Chang
ran over to him Hes still out with Tyler, whats wrong? Cletus puffed out,
Come with me.
So whats your name? Cletus asked the boy. Allen McLaughlin, Cletus
laughed as they traveled to the location Cletus was taking them to, Proud of your name? Allen smiled, Yea. Jodi stopped her car
and they walked about half a mile to where the location was hidden. A small man hole was the entrance, but the cover had gone missing.
Allen jumped down first, followed by Cletus, ten Jodi. Cletus lead them to a tore down door where five bodies of young men lay. Look
Cletus pointed at the chest of one boy. There was a gaping hole...from the inside. Sweet Jesus... Jodi muttered under her breath.
Allen scanned the room and noticed in the corner, what looked like giant dead spiders. Dead spiders with long tails. I should of stayed
in Scotland... Jodi peers into the room and starts screaming. Cletus and Allen run over and see a room full of eggs. Five had been opened
and one was hatching. It flung its self at Jodi. She screamed and closed her eyes and heard a BANG!. She opened her eyes and saw the
creature with a bullet hole in it, and Allen holding a .44 Magnum Revolver. As the creature lay bleeding, they noticed its blood was green, and
that it ate through the metal floor. What is it... Jodi said after a moment of silence. Cletus then said with sad eyes, It was an experiment, I
didnt have anything to do with this one, as I was busy with 4-12, but I remember what was contained in that room, an alien species, that they
were trying to tame for Biological weapons, much like 4-12...but they proved too volatile. Sadly, thats all I know, and I dont see how those little ones
could of killed 14 well armed soldiers, like the one before.....I think those were just the beginning.
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