This is a pic I made for the Twisted Fairytales contest....
So this is the alternative ending for "Goldilocks and the three bears"
While Goldilocks was sleeping she felt a twensy bit cold, so she opend her eyes and boy oh boy! there were three fuzzy brown coats in front of her.
First she tried the big one. which was very hard to open. "This one is just to scratchy" She said
Then she tried the medium one, wich was not that hard to open. "This one is too soaky!" she cried
Finally she tried the small one...which opened easily.
"Ah! This one is just about right!" Goldilocks said
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