Oooh, she's sexy. *shot dead* No, I'm loving the shape and detailing on the gun and her outfit in general, and the shapely anatomy is really appealing. If I were to crit aything, is her right leg: in my experience the leg doesn't usually bow in at the knee - in fact, it curves out instead. I think if you bend it in like that it makes her posture seem more awkward. :3 I hope that made sense. Her other leg is gorgeous, though, and your pencil work is so cleeean.
I kept trying to draw and redraw and erased until the paper wore thin and realized... hey maybe I should just start over! Thank you for liking the rest of her though
Ahhhh- Dawn :3 Haven't seen any fan art of her before- never really figured out what she could do, but the guy who draws her is an absolute ledgend ^^
For advanced crit- her body isn't curving with her pelvic tilt. Her pelvis is tilted too much for her not to be curved around so her shoulders are above her hips again. Her legs are a little wide apart for the tilt angle too. Unless her character has gymnastic legs and can do the splits- its not too comfortable.
> Go the limp!!! Naugh, if you want to fix it, it'll be worth it. Its a funny concept to 'let her limp' though! XD Never thought of it that way!! I can't imaginge what would happen if some of my characters could walk...
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For advanced crit- her body isn't curving with her pelvic tilt. Her pelvis is tilted too much for her not to be curved around so her shoulders are above her hips again. Her legs are a little wide apart for the tilt angle too. Unless her character has gymnastic legs and can do the splits- its not too comfortable.
Just one little comment since you have it on "roast me". Her left leg seems to be a bit too long. ^^;
But its still awesome!!! =333
Yeah i just thought the legs looked a little unbalanced XDDD