First post... Also give advice plz

I'm sorry if this is a waste of time since I put it under Constructive Critique Requested but...

Ehhhh- I just thought- Might as well post smth here while I'm... here... I literally just signed up here so if y'all have any tips on what I could do [While waiting for my submissions to go through] sooo uh- Yeah- I'm here now.

I'm... Well, I'm normally very introverted, and unsure, and don't really like using sites like this cause I never really know what's on it. But I did a bit of digging and thought, "Okay, this actually isn't that bad." So I signed up. But moving on- I know that I could look at the "help" but I'm someone who would rather have multiple different opinions on what I should do next.

Also, cause I mostly skip reading whatever and when I do actually read something my brain doesn't comprehend it for a while. 

Sooo... Waiting for the advice T-T

Also will accept advice for drawings. I have quite a few different styles depending on how I'm feeling so I'd appreciate anything you'd do differently or something.

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Uhh- I don't know if I should add anything else but I'm doing it anyways.

OC: Made by me

Time taken: Total around 1 hour 30 Min to 2 hours 10 Min... just around there :P I don't know the exacts

Sketch around 30- 50 minutes. 

Lineart around another 30 because I'm scared I'll smudge it and then I hesitate

Colouring around 30 since I couldn't find the right colours that I wanted. And because of procrastination