Mermaid

Posted May 23, 2006, 11:58:46 PM UTC

My first mermaid drawing

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590
May 24, 2006, 5:42:57 AM UTC
nice line art...very cool mermaid....
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- Angel
  May 24, 2006, 5:10:41 PM UTC
  Thank you!
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  590
  May 25, 2006, 5:31:23 AM UTC
  Welcome....
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ArkillianDragon
May 23, 2006, 8:59:29 PM UTC
Not sure how you'd like to be roasted considering its a sketch, but her left eye is too low,and her hair seems to extend a little to far out from the top and her back. After that, my commenting would give further suggestions that may be a bit much for a sketch that may not go any further than it has...
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- Angel
  May 23, 2006, 9:19:34 PM UTC
  Cool, criticism is much appreciated whether its a sketch or not ^_^
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  ArkillianDragon
  May 23, 2006, 9:38:17 PM UTC
  Not a problem ^^ Given reason I could help better than that but for a sketch, I felt that just that was appropriate just yet. Feel free to label something as a 'rip it apart' and I'll nit pick the whole pic with anything I can think of
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  Angel
  May 23, 2006, 9:41:36 PM UTC
  Ok, will do. Im open to criticism on any of my works. Im not easily offended
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  ArkillianDragon
  May 23, 2006, 9:52:22 PM UTC
  Ahhhhh good good. Not on sketches, but I'll do so on WIP or finished works Unless specified...
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Lunarbabe4
May 23, 2006, 5:02:49 PM UTC
This is really unique. I like the way you tried to make her a little bit different from the other mermaids you always see. *cough* Ariel *cough* Anyway, great work! I really like!
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- Angel
  May 23, 2006, 5:06:11 PM UTC
  Thank you! I dont like the generic mermaids either..Mermaids should be creepy like in Peter Pan!
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  Lunarbabe4
  May 23, 2006, 5:08:13 PM UTC
  Totally! Those broads are awesome (they're mean, too ).
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