Much better

This is for the 4th prompt of the Avangard portal, Hakai and his travel buddy, Galassia, step into the portal of the skies. Galassia took part in the races while Hakai was told to “stay put” and watch the race. as Galassia’s ship  was near the finish line, but was attacked by constructs sending her and the ship plummeting down underneath the clouds. Hakai, seeing this swan dived right after her, after landing and fighting the nearby foes (enjoying himself), was brought back up by the great Captain Dahn, who asked them for a little favor…