Comment 129810
Comment ID 129810
![[Art] Koteni and her element!](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_50749_thumb_ad384ebdc8e968da8a0c30d1ae9ce2c462f194fe1d912.jpg)
I like her outfit! Sturdy boots for an excellent gardener~
If I was to critique this - a tall order for such a nice piece! - I'd say it could best benefit from a pinch more attention to anatomy. The proportions are good, and the drawing style is very well executed, but there are a few places (mostly head, left hand, waist) which seem slightly off. Consider more details in the lineart, like on the boots, instead of only an outline like on the arms?
You could also try your hand at drawing a more specific plant? Does Koteni have a favorite crawling vine?
If I was to critique this - a tall order for such a nice piece! - I'd say it could best benefit from a pinch more attention to anatomy. The proportions are good, and the drawing style is very well executed, but there are a few places (mostly head, left hand, waist) which seem slightly off. Consider more details in the lineart, like on the boots, instead of only an outline like on the arms?
You could also try your hand at drawing a more specific plant? Does Koteni have a favorite crawling vine?
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