Comment 139966
Comment ID 139966
![[Art] Duel of the Mecha Gladiators.](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_55289_thumb_27cef920948a0f89d2812fe70d8bff5a63e4c10572ff3.png)
This is really cool. I really like that you captured Sereid's whole demeanor and the way she carries herself, I'm getting a lot of swagger from her. She would totally hide her anxiety behind a bombastic and flamboyant personality. You even nailed the tattoos and abs. Awesome stuff. You even included the belt so yay.
Constructive Critique: My one thing is Martin looks unsure of himself. Based on the earlier art he seems like more of a determined go-getter type of person. Martin trained hard, he earned his place in the OCL. I feel like he would (if not be overconfident) have like stronger more focused look.
Constructive Critique: My one thing is Martin looks unsure of himself. Based on the earlier art he seems like more of a determined go-getter type of person. Martin trained hard, he earned his place in the OCL. I feel like he would (if not be overconfident) have like stronger more focused look.
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