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Comment 149930
Comment ID 149930
ToastyCinnabear
Nov 8, 2023, 6:02:28 AM UTC
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[Writing] Alien Communication
Definitely some hope coming through for Vessel!
Between this chapter and the previous, there's nothing that leaps out about the writing itself that I feel like I would personally change.
I enjoyed reading everything you've written so far and I look forward to reading more!
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