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Comment 150439
Comment ID 150439
LadyDominicale
Nov 19, 2023, 5:25:53 PM UTC
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[Writing] Work of the Greats
I have one small critique for this section, "...but then she got an idea so great that she felt she didn’t even need inspiration."
Idea and inspiration are roughly the same word.
But "as thick as her thigh" that's freakin awesome
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