Comment 151752

Comment ID 151752

Dec 13, 2023, 1:08:46 PM UTC on [Writing] the call of godspawn. II
AAAAA
This is amazinggg!!!
I especially love these lines: Somewhere in the girl’s chest, something cracked. Her pupils began to widen, eyes turning pitch black. The arms snapped and two more were produced; raw red flesh with white tissues connecting the joints.
So descriptive and creepy, just how I like it!!

Replies

  • Dec 13, 2023, 11:19:31 PM UTC
    thx h Big Smile
    i dont really write much horror so this was a good step forward Smile