Comment 21624

You've no idea how much you have helped me, I am going to attempt to place everything you have just told me into this as soon as I get some new materials for drawing. I was actually thinking of doing it over again so I can keep both of them and see how these things help the image and what I had done right in the first place. I deeply thank you for all of your wonderful advice, as it shall help me along the lines of the rest of my art.

Also, I am very exicted bye the fact that you can, indeed, feel the emotion in this. I was really trying to bring that out, and I am just glad it worked.