I've always loved how you draw your figures, they're always so graceful-looking. But this guy's arms look a little thick for his body. I think maybe you should give the rest of him a little more muscle. But I love the cloak and the sword so far. Maybe instead of pointing the sword down, you could have him pointing it forward toward you; his pose doesn't really seem right for pointing the sword down. But that's just me ^^'
Great job!