Comment 25916

Comment ID 25916

[Art] Jubilee
BogusRed
Feb 25, 2006, 2:51:13 PM UTC on [Art] Jubilee
The torso is drawn very well. I like how the torso, crotch, and thighs have volume. However, the knees and lower parts of the legs and feet aren't as volumetric. Her expression is very cute. Nice job on the face and hair.

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  • Perplexity
    Feb 25, 2006, 2:57:39 PM UTC
    I guess I kinda copped out towards the end there? I'll try to redraw her legs before I color - or maybe I can fix it in Photoshop?
    Thank you for the critique! Wave
    • BogusRed
      Feb 25, 2006, 5:08:08 PM UTC
      You're very welcome. I hope I didn't roast you too bad.
      I'd suggest finding some reference of someone in a similar pose to get the legs. I don't think Photoshop will be able to fix the leg issue too much. Although you could cut out one leg and rotate it so that her left foot (our right) is on the ground.
      • Perplexity
        Feb 26, 2006, 11:55:38 AM UTC
        Roast me too bad? Heck no, you put a lotta sugar on it! Corky Smile I was expecting to be torn apart for choosing the roast me option Wink
        I sincerely appreciate all your suggestions - and I think the path of least resistance is to simply redraw!