First, I think you did well with the coloring, considering that you used colored pencils. No empty white spaces. (That's why I don't like coloring by hand anymore ><
Second, Your perspective could use a little work. The arms seem too short for the body.
And finally, I think you may need to pay a little more attention to where the creases fall into place with the clothes.
Anyway, nice work, and I hope this critique actually helps. >.>"
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