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BogusRed
May 23, 2006, 9:56:12 PM UTC
Hi Angel. Nice to see some more of your artwork here at PD.
Like Lunarbabe4 said, the hands need a little work. Hands are darn hard to draw but I've attached a visual crit to help you out a bit.
Also watch the forshortning on her left forearm (indicated by the black arrow).
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Angel
May 23, 2006, 10:07:03 PM UTC
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[Art] Vampy
Oh thats totally cool! Thank you, that helps a lot!
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BogusRed
May 23, 2006, 10:15:32 PM UTC
no problem
![[Art] Vampy](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_img_thumb_6160_c7bc0da2737420289be7808eab6f24765ebf6e42b9632.jpg)
Like Lunarbabe4 said, the hands need a little work. Hands are darn hard to draw but I've attached a visual crit to help you out a bit.
Also watch the forshortning on her left forearm (indicated by the black arrow).