I really like this picture. I do, however, think she looks just a little "mannish." I wish I was an artist so that I could tell you what it was about her, but I love your stle. The hand actually looks pretty good to my eye, but my eye might be worthless to you. Sorry about that. I do really like this picture though and I'm excited to see your revisions.
I don't think anything anyone says is worthless. I'm glad you like it. I put up a more complete version on here, but it wasn't at all what I wanted it to be. X( I did fix it afterwards, but I don't think I'm allowed to post the better copy. :/