Comment 49210
Comment ID 49210
![[Art] Pirate WIP](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_img_thumb_10022_a5077406fb63e69966839b033befa0995ebf1f014fe65.jpg)
Neck cramps! It's always hard to look at a picture all cock-eyed like this.
Details> Try some embroidery on the vest and making it a long vest. Or adding a sash to a short vest is very "piratey".
I'd watch the "Hips" too. He has womanly curves to his hips, men have more narrow and straight hips. (And you've THANK GOODNESS given him a crotch, but no bulge... he should have a little bulge in such tight pants. Most people leave out crotches all together so YAY!!!! You get Anatomy 101 bonus Points!!!! Woot!!)
You have a GREAT START however.. little details make all the difference, even if you think people don't notice, they do and don't realize it.
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This looks very UTENA inspired (nice style) Use UTENA wardrobe details, that regency style is VERY Pirate like as well.
Details> Try some embroidery on the vest and making it a long vest. Or adding a sash to a short vest is very "piratey".
I'd watch the "Hips" too. He has womanly curves to his hips, men have more narrow and straight hips. (And you've THANK GOODNESS given him a crotch, but no bulge... he should have a little bulge in such tight pants. Most people leave out crotches all together so YAY!!!! You get Anatomy 101 bonus Points!!!! Woot!!)
You have a GREAT START however.. little details make all the difference, even if you think people don't notice, they do and don't realize it.
^^
This looks very UTENA inspired (nice style) Use UTENA wardrobe details, that regency style is VERY Pirate like as well.
I'm bad about making my men look like women. It's only been recent(less than a year now) that I've been drawing men. D: Ever since preschool I've mainly only drawn women. >.< He is supposed to be femine, though. Perhaps I did go a little overboard. >.< Nyar.
I've also never gone into too much detail with the lower regions, such as bulges. I tend to draw in public and people like to stair when I work on the crotch too much. >#> It's even worse since I hate clothing and most... er...all of my people start off nude. >.<
Ah, yes... details. Those will come. >.< I just wanted to make sure there were no major errors I was overlooking. I hate having to erase details to fix an error that could have been dealt with prior to all the work. x_x
I haven't seen Utena in so long. xD I'd completely forgotten about it until now. <3
:snuggle huggles: Thank you for the help. :3 Art sites need more people who will help out. That's why I like Paperdemon. x3 <3
If people stare, stare right back and say "Yes, do you have a problem?"
If they giggle and snort, they are the ones seriously immature. Any *ANY* art teacher will tell you that starting with a nude is best, if peopple are prudes and get their jollies watching you draw something that intimidates them let them.
The only people who would have a problem with it, aren't worth your time anyway.
Just be honest if they start with the jeers and teasing.
"Like why R you like drawing him *giggle* nekkid?"
"Because, oh ye infantile one, I need something to put clothes on first. Were you born with clothes on? No. A Picture cannot be born that way either."
Simple as that and then THEY look like the idiots they are. Never let something like that make you self-conscious.
D: I so want to quote or paraphrase you. <3 May I? The way you said that was just the awesomeness. xD My responses never sound that smart. ;.; My brain deflated, but at least I'm not out of doodle juice. >.<
I sit my some pregnant, moody chick in Phychology, where I usualy do my drawing when I'm done with my work. I think she hates me and tries to make my life miserable. Sometimes I want to rip her tongue from her mouth. <_< I tend to try to just ignore her, though. Pregant teen women are pure evil-- no offense to women or anything.
^_^