Comment 52832

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ArkillianDragon
Jul 12, 2007, 4:58:57 PM UTC
If I may give some constuctive crit on this (Ignore it if you wish), although the colours are very beautiful, the picture has no draw power in it. What I mean by this is we can't relate to the picture in any way. The fairy doesn't look at us, she's not showing a feeling, her pose is closed of,and even though the picture feels magical, its still not obvious what is going on. Alot of time, posey pics are ok, but only if they're looking somewhere. It's something to look out for.

This would be a beutiful picture if the arms hugged around her slightly, and the fairy looking up, or with her hair pinned back with a apathetic expression. I'd like to see atleast one leg stretched out cause she looks uncomfortable. You're gonna say that it's only a doodle probably, and that's fine. These are my thoughts

Comment ID 52832

[Art] Alone
Inqy
Jul 12, 2007, 5:36:26 PM UTC on [Art] Alone
Nope, you're right. Wink It's not a doodle, it's a finished piece, and even though it would be lovely with all those things, as I said, she wanted the title to be 'Alone.' I don't think she wanted to be drawn at all.

I have a weird relationship with the things I draw, if they want it a certain way, it becomes that way, regardless of what I think.

But thank you for the criticism, if I re-do this picture at any time I will take it into consideration.

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  • ArkillianDragon
    Jul 12, 2007, 9:14:38 PM UTC
    As I said, taking my crit is up to you. The comment about doodles is that I've commented before on a non roast pic and I got yelled at cause it was a doodle XD A FINAL pic lookiing doodle ^^; Lol. It's up to you anyways- there's ways of drawing alone with making the viewer feel sorry for her or seeing isolation. That's all ^^