Comment 64781

Interesting subject and composition, it makes me want to know more about this character. There are many sharp edges in the background that could use some softening, and the dark gray cloud looks more like smoke than clouds. Lighting source seems to be coming from the upper right, but his cast shadow is not in keeping with that and it is not dark enough. Placing some highlights on the sides nearest to the light source would add more drama to the piece as well. Nice work, thanks for sharing it with us.