Comment 667
Comment ID 667
![[Art] Noonan](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_img_thumb_567_8bb30f5917b13dbeb868e4882e8d57795ec01d4a24db1.jpg)
Well... This is nice! I love the wings!
Wings,
Wings,
Let me fly away,
To the freedom,
Of life...
Ookay... Do me a favor and don't mind my poetric babblings...
one question, though: his right hand index finger and thumb... In my opinion, rest of the fingers should be closer to the index finger (tested that pose, and it really hurts, while holding my hand like that, or then i'm not as bendful as rest of the guys...) Oh, well... The question is this, will we be able to read your story here?
Wings,
Wings,
Let me fly away,
To the freedom,
Of life...
Ookay... Do me a favor and don't mind my poetric babblings...
one question, though: his right hand index finger and thumb... In my opinion, rest of the fingers should be closer to the index finger (tested that pose, and it really hurts, while holding my hand like that, or then i'm not as bendful as rest of the guys...) Oh, well... The question is this, will we be able to read your story here?
Yeah, that hand was the part that was a struggling on. Thanks for noticing that! I will try to fix it on the final draft before watercoloring it. ^^
Er...my story? I'm not really sure. I'm not that good at writing and I'm really really slow at developing everything because of school and such.