Comment 67127

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Mar 1, 2008, 5:38:01 PM UTC
It is hard to judge where you wanted to go with this as it is unfinished, but there does appear to be some proportional issues that don't work for me here. Her facial features are off, her nose too long, her forehead too short. The torso too, has some issues. The space from her neck to her breasts seems short, her shoulders a little too round, but I think it could also be the way her hair is lying on them. I hope you will continue to work on this piece, as I would love to see her done. Thanks for sharing this with us. Smile

Comment ID 67127

[Art] Dea
Mar 2, 2008, 8:12:20 PM UTC on [Art] Dea
Her shoulders were supposed to be scrunched up,and partially covered by hair. But her face is what made this a phaeled project - mostly for the reasons you have stated.

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