Comment 81634

Well, to me, this feels very cell styled in colouring. The basics of this picture I can understand- trees silhouetted against the sunset behind it, but at the moment the pieces don't fit together cause they're block style shaded. What you need if to make use of the red light source to highlight the grass's texture with a small brush, give the tree a slight halo on som edges to show it's level of 3D, make the red hue pass through the blue, make the water more translucent by either showing that it's fast, or showing that it has a bottom. A few things like that. I like how the water carries the shadow thoguh. The biggest thing it needs is a consistent colour temperature The red hue of the sunset. If I saw the original, I could say more thoguh.