Comment 93714

Comment ID 93714

[Art] Zoe Vanders
May 25, 2018, 5:20:23 PM UTC on [Art] Zoe Vanders
She's cute! Nice to see you sharing your art again Animeiac. What kind of critique are you looking for?

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  • May 25, 2018, 8:38:52 PM UTC
    Just something simple and thank you Smile
    • May 26, 2018, 4:19:16 PM UTC
      Sure! I suggest next time making the hands bigger since these ones look small in comparison to the rest of her body. Her knees seem kind of low as well which makes her lower legs feel short.

      It might help to practice proportions. though since you're doing cartooning, you certainly have the freedom to change the proportions to match your style. But it still helps to have some understanding of it.
      https://www.pinterest.com/pin/276056652138203728/?lp=true

      Let me know if you'd like more mentorship with your art, I'm happy to help guide you!
      • May 26, 2018, 5:03:39 PM UTC
        Thank you and you're right, I need to practice hands more often.
        • May 27, 2018, 3:53:58 PM UTC
          let me know if you need help with hands. I'm happy to pass along some resources.