Vegeta's big knife

Posted Jul 16, 2005, 7:01:00 PM UTC

I just drew this pic today but there is something wrong with it. I fixed his shorts they were too long ands now I still think they look messed up, but his one leg is supposed to look like it's back farther, so.. anyway, any feedback and critiques would be helpful and greatly appreciated!!
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Lilimayhem
Jan 22, 2006, 6:17:09 AM UTC
Maybe the muscles of his arms are a bit too big compare to his tummy (who's yummy * lick screen*) Except that, everything is ok, i cant believe how real the pants look. Great job. Did i said i love Vegeta? :fav:
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- Kichi
  Jan 24, 2006, 12:56:16 PM UTC
  eh i tried going over this with a permanent marker but it bled too much and f-ed his face up.. oh well, good thing I got a copy on my pc and on here... thanks again !!
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SaikonoYume
Oct 5, 2005, 7:58:45 PM UTC
Abs.... *lick* lol, I LOVE his pectoral anatomy, not only because it's exceedingly sexy, but because it's exceedingly well done. He's got spiffy pants, too. And a uber-nice sword.
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- Kichi
  Oct 9, 2005, 2:02:58 PM UTC
  thank you!
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Saiyakupo
Jul 17, 2005, 12:20:49 PM UTC
Oh wow he is very good looking in this picture. I like his eyes. YAY! Sword weilding Vegeta! .. or knife.. or.. something like that. Hmm... I'll try to give a little critique.. the one hand that is holding the knife... his wrist looks abit too small. .. I know that's not much critique, but even if I helped a little that would be good. This is an awesome drawing, wonderful details. great work.
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- Kichi
  Jul 17, 2005, 12:28:08 PM UTC
  No help is too small, I need it I want this one to be perfect as I can manage, being a mere mortal and all.
  I always thought Vegeta would enjoy a sword if he had one.
  I'm glad you like his eyes because I've been trying to find a way I like drawing him that isn't too like Toriyama's style. You know, like how Bogus Red has her way of drawing Vegeta, and I will have one as soon as I can figure one out.
  
  All the last bunch of sketches I've done of Vegeta have been trying to make him look differnt in some way, even if it's just drawing him like another artist would. Like Rumiko Takahashi, or you know.. the person who does Yu Yu Hakusho (although if I tried that I could just draw Hiei)
  
  Thanks again!
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  Saiyakupo
  Jul 17, 2005, 12:30:30 PM UTC
  You are very welcome! =D Every artist has the need to be original. Keep it up. :3
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AnimeBoyToyKoibito
Jul 16, 2005, 4:31:32 PM UTC
Hmm.. I would believe it was how the leg towards us is a bit more in need of attention. I personally think that the abdomen came out fine and shows how he is angled. But maybe it is just the leg in general that is closer to us that seems a bit out of place. As if you just wanted to finish it and put it down. Not to be rude or anything.

But this is a wonderful drawing all in all and I adore it!! Wonderfulk job on how damn hot he looks!!
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- Kichi
  Jul 17, 2005, 9:52:27 AM UTC
  ? What ? Iyou didn't seem rude to me.. I don't get it.. But your right. I really want to color this and everything. And yes, I did have fun drawing him.
  
  Thanks!
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- Kichi
  Jul 17, 2005, 9:57:05 AM UTC
  you know what? it is his leg in the front I'm thinking, it shouldn't be as long as it is, then the bottom of his shorts wouldn't be so different in comaprison, thanks for the help!
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  AnimeBoyToyKoibito
  Jul 17, 2005, 2:37:04 PM UTC
  Hehe, I can't wait to see him colored then!! I am glad that I helped you! Other than that one part is is wonderful, and I applaud you for it!
  
  -applauds-
  
  You just keep posting and I'll keep helping and telling you how wonderful it is!!
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  Kichi
  Jul 18, 2005, 2:20:45 PM UTC
  lol (bows) Thanks!
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(anonymous)
Jul 16, 2005, 11:56:57 AM UTC
I think it is the basic angle of his abdomen that is causing you so many problems. If you maybe turned the angle of his stomach towards us a little bit more, then it should help. This is a very sexy drawing of him though. You should be very proud. I bet you had alot of fun drawing this one. LOL
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- Kichi
  Jul 17, 2005, 9:57:49 AM UTC
  Thanks a lot! and thanks for the help! much appreciated!
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