Hall Om Mig Nu - 02 sketch

Second of two sketches I did last night/this morning. Probably the lesser of both. I never submit my rough sketches, so I figured I would submit these to show a bit more of the progress that happens with my artwork. Nothing super amazing, I know there are some things that are off, but I wasn't really paying too much attention with my rough sketch. They're fixable on the computer anyway. Feel free to point some things out, but be gentle lol ;3. Sketch was edited in photoshop so it might look a bit weird x_x

One of my watchers had mentioned that Zimmie looked rather masculine in the face, and I agreed to it, also saying that I did it on purpose. So I figured I'd experiment with making her more feminine overall. Feel free to look between my previous work and this one to see the difference. I'm not sure if I like it LOL. Mostly just because I'm not used to it I guess ^^. Will post the story to this once the inking is done o3o Cause there is one..

Zimmie @ Zimmie and Malcolm @ 2541

Hall Om Mig Nu (Swedish) => Hold Me Now (English) from the song by Nana Gronval (sp?)