Pledge

Posted Aug 5, 2009, 4:18:48 AM UTC

Pledge.

I am wondering though, can anyone give any suggestions on making better contrast with pencils? One of the greatest problems that I spot in this picture (aside of course, from proportions and getting the right shapes) is that my picture looks the same throughout. The contrast between light and darker areas isn't strong enough so that there is no sense of layer...the wolves just seems to melt into the background and vice versa.

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  • Oct 28, 2009, 7:28:17 PM UTC
    I am completely amazed at anyone who can do this much detail work in pencil and have it look like anything at all. Although I cannot offer any suggestions to help, I am impressed with the work on the fur and feathers! Awesome work. I'm envious!
  • Aug 8, 2009, 7:44:46 PM UTC
    I was just gonna suggest what pigelt did, but I'd suggest using a range up to 9B if you need to I wouldn't use anything bolder than a 4B though- this is a delicate pic and anything too soft would ruin it. Seal heaps and smudge less!! T.T
    • Aug 15, 2009, 9:03:52 AM UTC
      Thanks for the advice Smile

      I was just curious though, how would you tell the difference between a soft pencil mark and a hard one?
      • Aug 16, 2009, 7:19:46 PM UTC
        Soft penils have alot more charcoal in it, so they're darker, and they lay out material faster and thicker. Cause of this, they're easy to smudge and a bit messy, but they make some epic contrasts.

        For example, this pic [thumb24117] has HB around the face for a subtle grey shade and tone control, while the hair and outfit has up to a 6B lead in shading to achieve the dark shades. I use 2H for my construction lines http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs44/i/2009/064/b/c/Pencil_Tutorial__Sketching_by_Arkillian.jpg like this cause the 2H has alot of graphite in it which is easier to erase (unless you push hard) cause it puts less lead down at once. I think the range is 6H to HB to 9B. If you go too much higher than an HB lead, then the only thing that can lift the lead is a kneedable eraser cause it sticks to the graphite, and lifts it off. If you used an eraser on 6B it'd smudge + stain the paper. That may be a desired result though... Hope that helped ^^;
        • Aug 22, 2009, 7:28:09 AM UTC
          Wow, your explanations surely did help, I understand more about it now Big Smile

          Thank you so much!
  • Aug 4, 2009, 10:31:54 PM UTC
    Hi Dienle. Lovely piece of work, first of all. The effect you are looking for is called Chiaroscuro, which is a word coined by the Rennaisance Italians to describe light and dark, even ranging in one artwork from the lightest possible shade (white) to the darkest (black).

    I see you have probably used a fairly hard pencil here, perhaps a HB or B. Maybe you can get more contrast in the darkest areas using a 3B or 4B quite liberally.

    Just a thought. It's still a great piece though.
    • Aug 15, 2009, 9:02:35 AM UTC
      Chiaroscuro, interesting, I would have a search up the term Smile

      Yes, I was also thinking of using other types of pencils, although that would meant having to search out for it because art/stationary shops are scant in my area.

      Nonetheless, thanks for your advice Smile

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