Panel WIP

Posted Dec 6, 2011, 3:37:05 PM UTC

Think I may start a web comic or something. Idk yet. Feel like I need more practice xD

As for this, Yay! Scanner finally works again! xD

Also I feel like it could use alot of work. idk where. It's still not done and I need more adding of details and touching up, but I feel the basic outline is weird. idk xD

Comments

Cokekitty
Mar 24, 2012, 8:00:50 AM UTC
I think this is a great start! The mountains look fantastic. But at first glance, I wasn't sure if that space in the foreground was supposed to be flat land or a lake or something. A little more detail would be nice there, and make sure to turn the contrast dial to eleven if you decide to shade or color this! Depending on where you want your viewer to look, consider using bolder colors for the objects of interest, and dulled, more desaturated colors for the parts that are just kind of adding to the composition. For example, deep purples and browns and such for the mountains, and maybe softer, cooler greens for the land mass in the front. Blurring it a little might help the focus, too.
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- Tacom33t
  Mar 30, 2012, 1:04:34 AM UTC
  Contrast dial to 11? XD. That confused me. Tis done with pencil yo haha. I decided to scratch it till I got the story I wanted down xD. That and I want to draw pics with references before I try to draw from just studying art xD. Though I will take this all into account when I draw the next one . Thanks for the advice ant tips. I'll mess with this one and post an updated version using said advice and hopefully get feedback from that too? :o
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  Cokekitty
  Mar 31, 2012, 7:08:27 AM UTC
  The contrast dial thing was a joke that apparently speaks very clearly of my age. All I mean is bump up the contrast! Make your darks DARK, and your lights LIGHT. I can't wait to see the updated version.
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  Tacom33t
  May 5, 2012, 8:06:24 PM UTC
  Haha updated it for ya.
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