This is a pic i drew of my own character Seroth and his brother Vegeta. The Colored pencils didn't show up too well on the computer but i am going to try and fixit using the computer. however any Comments are welcome.
Hi Seroth Talon. As you requested I'll go ahead and give you a critique... The first thing I think you need to work on is the porportions in your drawing. As artists when we spend a lot of time on a drawing we tend to become blind to the porportion problems with a piece. I suggest holding your drawing up to a mirror from time to time as you draw and the places that need improvement will suddenly become clearer to you. Don't worry too much about your medium at this point, just get the drawing part right first. Seroth's eyes are really huge and the shapes of their faces are a little odd. I think what you need to do is just keep on practicing. Practice by copying good drawings and drawing ontop of good drawings (take a piece of tracing paper and put it ontop of some of Akira Toriyama's artwork and then basically redraw the original just to get a feel for the DBZ face and body porportions). For a while, I suggest doing only line drawings and concentrating on that aspect. Worry about coloring later. Keep practicing.
Thanks for the advise I will take that into account. I have always made Seroth's eyes way too large, it is a habit i am trying to break. Vegeta looks a little goofy and the faces are oddly shaped, but i think that that problem is merely exclusive to this picture, normally they look better but I thought this pic would be the best way to introduce Seroth to everyone. I really value your advise and thank you immensly for helping me. Thanks!
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Thanks I am really glad you like him. I have a lot of pics of him, in fact i have pics of him anywhere from normal to Super Saiyan 3. I also have my own special level of Super Saiyan. I am really glad you like him. I will make sure to post more of him. Also I have a few Vegeta pics in progress so i will also post them later. "(sarcastic tone) My plan to take over the world with an army of drooling girls is almost complete Muahahahaha!" ~ Seroth
I like the concept of this. If Goku can have a brother why can't Vegeta?? Anyway I like the idea. If you color alittle darker that might help it show up better on the scanner and it adds alot to the drawing too. A fine point marker helps the line work show up well also. Oh yeah and welcome to PD
lol actually i laughed when i saw Vegito because he looks just like Seroth. Actually if you play Budokai 3 and use vegito's alternate costume he is wearing the same gi as Seroth. " Yah but I was first!" ~ Seroth I am glad that you like him
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The first thing I think you need to work on is the porportions in your drawing. As artists when we spend a lot of time on a drawing we tend to become blind to the porportion problems with a piece. I suggest holding your drawing up to a mirror from time to time as you draw and the places that need improvement will suddenly become clearer to you. Don't worry too much about your medium at this point, just get the drawing part right first. Seroth's eyes are really huge and the shapes of their faces are a little odd.
I think what you need to do is just keep on practicing. Practice by copying good drawings and drawing ontop of good drawings (take a piece of tracing paper and put it ontop of some of Akira Toriyama's artwork and then basically redraw the original just to get a feel for the DBZ face and body porportions). For a while, I suggest doing only line drawings and concentrating on that aspect. Worry about coloring later. Keep practicing.
"(sarcastic tone) My plan to take over the world with an army of drooling girls is almost complete Muahahahaha!" ~ Seroth
" Yah but I was first!" ~ Seroth
I am glad that you like him