Comment 13446

Comment ID 13446

[Art] The Seamstress - WIP Shading 3
Aug 29, 2005, 1:18:18 AM UTC on [Art] The Seamstress - WIP Shading 3
Wow This is looking great. I like the change you made on the boot. It's much more convincing now. I love the work you've done for the ground. It's starting to really feel like she's within an environment which is really difficult to do. I also love what you've done with the hands and her shirt. The quiver is also nicely done. I'm sorry I didn't get a chance to comment on your previous posting of this. I've been really busy lately. Sad

Anyway, good night. I'm glad I got a chance to see this before going to bed tonight.

One suggestion though, that curving tree limb makes me nervous, as if it's too close to her head. Puting two shapes close like that creates tension. Perhaps make it lower and have her in front of it (make it pass behind her) to get some overlapping action. Or move it up just a little more.

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