Comment 14159

Comment ID 14159

[Art] Only one puffball
BogusRed
Sep 15, 2005, 8:31:59 PM UTC on [Art] Only one puffball
Yes Super Smash Bros. comics! THis is funny. There is just one suggestion I have for you; I didn't know Kirby sucked up Jiggly Puff until I read your description. I think just adding one panel in there before the last panel showing Kirby sucking in Jiggly would make the story clearer. Are you planning to do more of these? I'd certainly like to see more.

Replies

  • BogusRed
    Sep 15, 2005, 8:33:05 PM UTC
    wait, i just had a funny thaught. What if you added a bit more to the end, like you know how when Kirby eats someone and wants to get rid of it he sort of farts out a little star? maybe he could fart out the microphone or something hahhaa
    • BamboozledByAnime
      Sep 16, 2005, 1:45:41 AM UTC
      HAHA, yes that would be quite funny ^_^ Or he could just bloat out Jiggly puff from his butt like Yoshi does with people he makes into egss hehe.
  • BamboozledByAnime
    Sep 16, 2005, 1:44:34 AM UTC
    Ah, thankyou very much Susie ^_^ And I had thought of having Kirby sucked up in beggining, but thought it wouldn't be as much a surprised if I showed him being el-suxored up before showing Kirby bloated hehe. Guess it can work either way ^_^ I'm glad you liked it, I shall see if I can't do another, but I need to figure out a better way to make them than with a plastic anime tablet for a ruler and a ultra fine point ink pen for coloring/lining the line-bars O_X lol.