Comment 14163
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Yes Super Smash Bros. comics! THis is funny. There is just one suggestion I have for you; I didn't know Kirby sucked up Jiggly Puff until I read your description. I think just adding one panel in there before the last panel showing Kirby sucking in Jiggly would make the story clearer. Are you planning to do more of these? I'd certainly like to see more.
Comment ID 14163
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Ah, thankyou very much Susie ^_^ And I had thought of having Kirby sucked up in beggining, but thought it wouldn't be as much a surprised if I showed him being el-suxored up before showing Kirby bloated hehe. Guess it can work either way ^_^ I'm glad you liked it, I shall see if I can't do another, but I need to figure out a better way to make them than with a plastic anime tablet for a ruler and a ultra fine point ink pen for coloring/lining the line-bars O_X lol.
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