Comment 154751

Comment ID 154751

[Art] Metallic Luster
Mar 2, 2024, 9:50:52 PM UTC on [Art] Metallic Luster
Oh goodness, this is so cinematic!! Your use of color and textures really sets the tone for this piece, and I adore it.
The rectangles/sharpness of the lines add to the futuristic effect as well.

I see you requested constructive critique, so I took another look. At the floor/wall at the bottom, with the rectangle and circle detailing, I think the lack of texture and colors in that section compared to the neighboring parts makes it stand out a little, which might not've been what you intended.

As I said though, I love this piece.
(Side note, I like Myrhh. <3 This would not surprise you if you saw my character. Elves with long hair and glasses solidarity *insert handshake emoji*)

Replies

  • Mar 3, 2024, 1:01:40 AM UTC
    Thank you! Yeah, I'm trying to figure out how backgrounds work. I can do characters fine but foreground/background is my archnemesis. Also, while your character doesn't have that much artwork for it, I think it's also great!
    • Mar 3, 2024, 12:22:57 PM UTC
      Backgrounds are *rough*, I don't blame you. Maybe doing landscape pieces that don't require a character could be a possible way to practice going forward? But I think you did a great job here so you should feel proud!
      (and aw, thank you, Fayen doesn't have much art yet because I write instead but one day...)