Awwww! My little MoonDemon is not only a talented writer but a talented artist as well! I'm very impressed. I have no advice to give since I can't draw to save my life, but I love the picture. I think the kiddo's face should be pressed against the thigh, it'd be very cute that way. I wonder if you curve her sides a bit and kind of aim for more of an hour-glass figure it that will get rid of the chunkiness that your overactive imagination believes is there but really isn't. Bravo SuperMommy!
She's supposed to look chunky but what I'm worried about is she looks more like she has a dude's bod with NORKS (Just learned that word from the forums, isn't it a hoot ) I think I'm getting it how I mean for it to look, I'll post the new version as soon as I change a few more things. I haven't drawn anything except stick figures for my Cruzito in 4-ever so I'm not expecting this one to look exactly as it does in my head, just close, LOL. THANKS for checking this out