Comment 19195

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karanakaou
Nov 18, 2005, 4:41:37 PM UTC
Yay! My first roast. Big Smile
*takes out butter knife to scrape of crispy topping of critiques* Laughing
Yep, she's leaning against a wall. You can't see it because I cut it (I couldn't color the pants like I wanted...Annoyed ) but her right leg is slightly bent and carrying some of her weight. And, I wasn't going for any overtly sensuous kind of pose; this character has a back story about ninety miles long, so she's got more going for her than her looks (her child is murdered...oooo...drama....) ROFL.
Ahh, yeah, I agree with you about the hair. I ended up cutting some of it out (along that long chunk of hair) because it looked even weirder than this does...Grog...(I'm gonna' give that thing with the ponytail and try too Smile
Thank you so much! I have alot of stuff to go back and look over. Grin

Comment ID 19195

[Art] Sagaku-My First Attempt
ArkillianDragon
Nov 19, 2005, 3:44:14 AM UTC on [Art] Sagaku-My First Attempt
Ahhhh- perhaps a little leg for the next picture similar to this- she looks out of balance without it, and props always make a picture interesting. You should only crop stuff that isn't needed to enhance the picture Smile Leaning on a wall or what is imprortant. Experiment a little with the ponytail- maybe a plait or something would be cool too Smile

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  • karanakaou
    Nov 19, 2005, 7:33:54 AM UTC
    Yeah, the original is at my dorm, so once I get there, it's eraser time! Laughing
    • ArkillianDragon
      Nov 19, 2005, 9:12:35 PM UTC
      Naugh- don't erase it. If you want to improve on this pic, put it against the light and re draw it agains tthe old one Smile Unless its still in pencil only....
      • karanakaou
        Nov 20, 2005, 7:01:08 AM UTC
        Still just in pencil. Smile I think I will fiddle with it, just because I have so many ways of making it look better now! Big Smile