A poem about loss, gain, and everything in between. Short and hopefully right to the point. This poem was absolutely screaming to be written, so here it is. :) I would LOVE crits; please oh please :yes:
This is one of my most recent poems, inspired by a young man that came into the ER where I work...Help me out with this, can you tell what he did? I'm not sure if the poetic situation is very clear, so all help is appreciated!
Walter Wexler's had a heart attack, and the only person who can save him has just been hit by a train. How will he survive? * This is the final version of a short story I've done for my creative writing class. I like the flow, pacing, and most of the characters, however it has its bad spots. If you see them, please let me know! I'd like this story to be everything it could. :D