A poem about loss, gain, and everything in between. Short and hopefully right to the point. This poem was absolutely screaming to be written, so here it is. :) I would LOVE crits; please oh please :yes:
This is one of my most recent poems, inspired by a young man that came into the ER where I work...Help me out with this, can you tell what he did? I'm not sure if the poetic situation is very clear, so all help is appreciated!
Walter Wexler's had a heart attack, and the only person who can save him has just been hit by a train. How will he survive? * This is the final version of a short story I've done for my creative writing class. I like the flow, pacing, and most of the characters, however it has its bad spots. If you see them, please let me know! I'd like this story to be everything it could. :D
Poem number 3 from my creative writing class...This is one of those pieces of writing that just kind of, came, to me. Alot of the lines in this are kind of cryptic, but I just loved the language. I also love villanelle's in general; the form fits my natural language (Heidinese as my TA calls it) very well :wacko:
This is my first poem from my creativ writing class. We just moved out of poetry and I thought it was a good time for me to post these. This is a poem describing a scene we encountered over our summer. It's all about descripition and image usage, so there's no rhyme. Don't worry, I've got more poems coming!