I wouldn't mind that... Anywhoo I think he turned out great. You really have a way with your characters' movement. It's just so flowing! BTW, I think I had seen a book called Blue Heron. Any connection? --- "I may not live in a perfect world but I can create one on paper. "
No, none at all. The Blue Heron book is by Avi (my least favorite author, lol), and is about some girl's father and step-mother and how they're at each other's throats. Definitely a difference, lol.
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"I may not live in a perfect world but I can create one on paper. "