Comment 40596
Comment ID 40596
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I think the feet could use a bit of definition; the (our) right one has a flat sole when it probably should be flat. The (our) right should probably be foreshortened, since it is drawn in an overhead view, when the image is drawn from a much lower angle.
The folds of the clothes seem a bit over done; taking the assumption they are baggy, they don't need as many folds at the top of the thighs (and (our) left arm) since the material will hang off the solid area literally straight down under it bunches up on the next solid thing, like the top of the boot or his hands. You might find it helpful to use real life references (even with what you are wearing
) for the folds.
Hope that helps- and I have to say, I do rather like the design of the outfit.
The folds of the clothes seem a bit over done; taking the assumption they are baggy, they don't need as many folds at the top of the thighs (and (our) left arm) since the material will hang off the solid area literally straight down under it bunches up on the next solid thing, like the top of the boot or his hands. You might find it helpful to use real life references (even with what you are wearing
) for the folds.Hope that helps- and I have to say, I do rather like the design of the outfit.
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