this is realy amezing allready!!I relly love the details and shadows + pose! =D
andd if I can say one lil thing that bugs me a bit... is the midle finger of that woman it's too bold maby you can make that part(on the right side) a lil darker with shadows so you can see it's bent over the hand of that boy..(hope that made sence lolx) ) anyways can't Wait to see it finished! <3
Seregil is supposed to have "bold hands" he's a swordsman. (I presume you're talking about Seregil. The Man with the long hair.)
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It's sticking out closer to the camera than the others... and because it's overlapping the ring and index fingers it looks thicker (and it is)
It's partically perspective, camera angle and probably a little over exaggeration on my part too.
Not enough I'm gonna worry about it after the fact though. ^_^