Comment 48666

Comment ID 48666

[Art] Ill Hold Your Heart
eegirlee
Jan 8, 2007, 1:53:40 AM UTC on [Art] Ill Hold Your Heart
I love the overall feel of this drawing, the composition is great.
However,the drawing is off by more than a little. The body tilts, when it would be turned for this pose to be comfortable.To get the full feel that the head was tilted, you would have to see the neck and part of the jawline. Seen from the front with the scarf hiding any possible inclinations of this, it looks unnatural and uncomfortable.

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  • bloodysmurf
    Jan 8, 2007, 2:27:34 PM UTC
    Im really glad you liked the picture. Also, thanks for the in depth critique. I cant say Ill go back and fix it, because the scarf is part of the meaning...but still thanks so much for the help and comment ^_^