Comment 53727
Comment ID 53727
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Glorification of the sex industry aside, here's some quick tips:
-it's pretty much impossible to have even a 3/4 view of the head like that with a back view unless you are that kid from the Exorcist. I think you went for a turn here, where that would be plausible, but there's too much of the face showing.
-it's also pretty much impossible to stick both your elbows in like that. You could get one, maybe, but it hurts your back to do both.
-when you're making for a 'sexy' pose, it's good to try to stand/sit/lay that way yourself; otherwise it just looks extremely uncomfortable.
-and this as more of a general tip: it's usually better to hold off on frilly, complicated things with bows and ribbons and floaty hair and everything until you have human anatomy down pat. Floofy, floaty things hide the body, and just make it harder.
Apologies if I'm coming off rude here; I'm unused to this. Your inking is quite nice, however.
-it's pretty much impossible to have even a 3/4 view of the head like that with a back view unless you are that kid from the Exorcist. I think you went for a turn here, where that would be plausible, but there's too much of the face showing.
-it's also pretty much impossible to stick both your elbows in like that. You could get one, maybe, but it hurts your back to do both.
-when you're making for a 'sexy' pose, it's good to try to stand/sit/lay that way yourself; otherwise it just looks extremely uncomfortable.
-and this as more of a general tip: it's usually better to hold off on frilly, complicated things with bows and ribbons and floaty hair and everything until you have human anatomy down pat. Floofy, floaty things hide the body, and just make it harder.
Apologies if I'm coming off rude here; I'm unused to this. Your inking is quite nice, however.
yea i noticed the head when i firsted sketched it but i just wanted to get it fifnished for a friend in real life and having to deal with other things like band camp x.x
and both his arms isnts back his left arm it slightly tucked by his waist and ive tried the pose and can do it
and yea i wanted todo the crimp frill but time caught up to me and i do think i have the human anatomy down this was just a sketched colored and for a 1 hr pic. i think its good
thanks i know what needs to be done just the sketch
and thanks i try to keep it nice