Comment 67985

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Mar 29, 2008, 2:28:28 PM UTC
I am not familiar with this character so I will just have to give you my observations based on just what I see here. This looks like an interesting character with a lot going on. There are many little details in the attire but they are not all that easily seen, perhaps if you shaded a little it would help. The one arm is noticeably shorter than the other and the wings look odd chopped off as they are. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Comment ID 67985

[Art] Yukai Figure Concept
Mar 30, 2008, 12:10:30 AM UTC on [Art] Yukai Figure Concept
Unfortunately, I have normal sized paper to work with. And it barely even fits on my scanner, so I had to cut the wings off since they are supposed to be spread. As for shading, they asked it didn't have any so they could get the details worked in without smudging obscuring anything. However, now that it is in their hands, I do plan on doing exactly that!

As for the arm, I tried (and failed, noticeably) at making him be slightly tilted, so as that most of his weight was placed upon one leg more than the other--thus causing the arm to appear shorter. Ah well, I'll try to fix that, as you have pointed it out! Thank you for your critique. <3

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