Comment 70616

Interesting concept and I love the story. I find this piece rather dull. There are not enough differences in values and color for me. The grays of the background seem to be a yellow/green gray, maybe if they were more towards purple or blue it would help. White highlights in places would give the feel of slime or wetness, which would add to the feel of birth. Very interesting from a conceptual point of view, thanks for sharing it.